Here's a link to my new fan fiction based on true events:
http://www.marathonfanfic.blogspot.com
New Fan Fiction
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Shadowbreaker
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The link doesn't lead anywhere... but there is a place to put your fan factions somewhere on Bungie.org. Try searching around.
Whoa, I'm in it!
Everybody's in it!
Am I living in the Matrix?
This is good. Long, but good.
Everybody's in it!
Am I living in the Matrix?
This is good. Long, but good.
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Lawstiker
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I agree with ukimalefu, if you manage to get past the longness of this story it is quite good. Its like the events of the pfhorums retold for a Action film. I thought it was very well writen. Good job on this, its not every day we get good Marathon Fan Fiction.ukimalefu wrote:This is good. Long, but good.
But my favorite part was this:
QUOTE(Quote taken from the story)Bridget exhales deeply through her nose and moans quietly. Ryoko makes her feel more like a woman than surgeons and estradiol ever could.[/quote]
Its so disturbing, but hilarious at the same time.
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This is truly fantastic. Good work.
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Wait. That's fiction? I should probably see a specialist then.
But it is a pretty good story. I would fit in perfectly.
But it is a pretty good story. I would fit in perfectly.
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Nobody hipped me to that, dude.
I will blight your soul!
Nobody hipped me to that, dude.
I will blight your soul!
Al that is needed, is for it to be made into a pdf, so it can be downloaded/bookmarked. Or at least put each chapter in a different URL (can still be the same page if Blogger allows it, I don't know if it does)Lawstiker wrote:I agree with ukimalefu, if you manage to get past the longness of this story it is quite good. Its like the events of the pfhorums retold for a Action film. I thought it was very well writen. Good job on this, its not every day we get good Marathon Fan Fiction.
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Once again I agree with you. This would be absolutely awesome in PDF format, for some reason I love PDF's, and dividing the story up into different URLs would make it easier for people with limited time to read it faster.ukimalefu wrote:Al that is needed, is for it to be made into a pdf, so it can be downloaded/bookmarked. Or at least put each chapter in a different URL (can still be the same page if Blogger allows it, I don't know if it does)
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Well, maybe not everybody.ukimalefu wrote:Whoa, I'm in it!
Everybody's in it!
Am I living in the Matrix?
This is good. Long, but good.
aaaw moppy wanted to be there aswell.
What are you, if not seven different shades of stupid?
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Not gonna lie, After skimming through this, I was looking forward to seeing what the author would have me doing.CryoS wrote:aaaw moppy wanted to be there aswell.
Alan's in there--use your imagination.MoppyPuppy wrote:Not gonna lie, After skimming through this, I was looking forward to seeing what the author would have me doing.
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Man, my chapter sucks.
I'm sorry I couldn't put everyone in the story. Some people I just didn't know enough about. Others I just couldn't work in. I hope you liked it. It sounds like somebody did.
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Please make another Pfhorums based fanfiction.Ari wrote:I'm sorry I couldn't put everyone in the story. Some people I just didn't know enough about. Others I just couldn't work in. I hope you liked it. It sounds like somebody did.
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hehe im not in there, i dont think... I havnt read the whole thing yet.
D?rovací tvá?í.
Fobo: I find it hard to keep a sentence down under two paragraphs.
I'm about halfway done with reading it, but so far I like it. It's written very nicely, well done. I especially enjoyed the chapter involving me, even though it didn't end well. Haha, I hope you have time to write some more, Ari.
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I had a little bit of free time and read through it all and I though this was really good. You really do have some writing skill and I completly agree with Meta to make another one, if you have the time too of course. Great job Ari!Ari wrote:I'm sorry I couldn't put everyone in the story. Some people I just didn't know enough about. Others I just couldn't work in. I hope you liked it. It sounds like somebody did.
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OMG!
the blue = irons
the blue = irons
D?rovací tvá?í.
Fobo: I find it hard to keep a sentence down under two paragraphs.
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Bravo. I canceled my plans so I could keep reading this tonight.
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Meta
Inguinal Falx wrote:Bravo. I declined to keep up with my own life to read a short story about a community dedicated to an obscure Mac FPS dating back to 1996.
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Meta: your statement is accurate but is it kosher to alter someone else's posts like this?
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Probably not. Being a cynic is just my thing.Inguinal Falx wrote:Meta: your statement is accurate but is it kosher to alter someone else's posts like this?