irons wrote:I don't think you realized this, so it's OK, but what you should do is write whatever your character(s) want to do and wait for the rest to react. I'd appreciate it if you changed your post to reflect these ideas.
This is my first time partaking in a forums role-playing game, so pardon me if I do something that isn't really part of normal role-playing conduct. So assuming that this game is going to be following the format of a short-story, would this be more appropriate?
But then, just behind the door across from him, shouted a panicked voice, "Don't shoot! We're coming!"
The automatic door in front of him opened, and in stepped a short, stocky man in blue overalls?must have been part of the Science Department?with pale skin and dark hair.
Standing behind him was a tall, well-built man whose orange jumpsuit was grubby and stained with blood, and his bright red hair was a greasy and tangled mess.
"My name's Harley?this is my brother, Dylan." Said the shorter man;
"We heard that this area had less combat happening in it than most other local parts of the ship, so we were going to hole up here, get some supplies, and maybe look for a way off this hell-hole and get back to the colony."
Just give me your approval and I'll replace my old post with this one, or change it more according to whatever it should look like.
EDIT: It would seem CryoS beat me to it.